I remember it like it was yesterday.
After a two hour drive, I walked into the house where Daddy was fighting for breath.
The smell of death and cigarette smoke covered the house like a fog.
Meandering my way through to the back room, I peeked through the door and saw his open mouth, drawn up at the corners like he had just finished the last line of some George Jones anthem. Daddy was in and out of consciousness, and his breathing was erratic. He sounded like he was trying to gargle salt water in slow motion. The only thing I had learned during my rotation as a medical student at the VA hospital was the death rattle, and Daddy had it, of that I was sure.
He was leaving us—and soon.
Sister and I stood on either side of his bed.
I put my hand on Daddy’s damp, stringy hair and smiled at how much he and Taylor reminded me of each other—those blue eyes, wide foreheads, and smiles that lit up a room. His hands were cold, so I wrapped them up in mine and told him to squeeze if he could hear me. A few sec- onds passed and he pried his eyes almost open like it took all the strength he had in the world, the corners of his mouth quaking toward a smile.
“Daddy, we’re right here with you; me and Sister and Aunt Glenda. I know you know how much we love you,” I said.
I thought of a hundred things I wanted to say. I wanted to joke with him and tell him to dance one off with St. Peter when he got to the pearly gates. I wanted to tell him not to leave me like this, with all this life yet to live, so much school left to finish, and two kids yet to raise.
I wanted to tell him to at least stay until I made doctor, for heaven sakes. But I didn’t say any of that. I looked over at Sister, who was wearing more sadness on her face than I’d ever seen, and at her hands mingled in with mine and Daddy’s.
The pauses in his breathing seemed to last forever, all of us holding ours, too, until he eked out another thready exhalation. We strained out a tinny verse of “Amazing Grace” when the gaps felt too uncomfortable to bear. Then I put my cheek to his and told him how much I would miss him and how life would never be the same without him. In the stillness of my breath on his face, I felt the life leave him. I looked up to catch the last light in his eyes, but they were already closed, his head tilted over in surrender.
I fell to his chest and sobbed until somebody unclenched my hand from his and made me walk outside for air.
Daddy was finally at peace.
No more labored breathing.
No more cancer or liver failure.
No more junker cars that wouldn’t start or wayward couches to thrash around on, trying to get comfortable.
No more trying with all his might to stay sober.
No more yearning for a quart of beer or asking for a light for his cigarette. No more hurt, no more loss, no more tears.
Probably for the first time in his fifty-six years.
Waiting for me to be there with him as he crossed life’s last threshold was perhaps his greatest gift to me. The sacred mystery that surrounds death is like nothing else in life, and it is a privilege to walk the last miles home with someone.
It would make me a better mother and woman and a better doctor, and it is my most cherished memory with him.
I knew there would never be anyone else quite like him. I also knew that my complicated relationship with him was far from over.
For as long as I could after Daddy’s death, I clawed at the edges of everything, trying to find a way to stay above water, but nothing seemed to be able to stop my sure and certain unraveling. After twenty-seven years of pretending to be fine, something in me broke—like a dam too cracked and fragile to fight the constant beating rains.
It felt like there was nothing I could do but stand like a spectator and watch the water rise around me, as if every- thing that had buoyed me to the surface of things was gone, even the faith that had once seemed unshakable.
Over the next few months, my life became so unmanageable that it felt like I was trying to survive an ocean storm on a flimsy piece of driftwood.
Taken from my memoir, All the Pretty Things, a broken song I wrote for Daddy and me. And for anyone who needs to find some hope to cling to on the hard days.
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Hugs, dear Edie. Next month will mark twelve years since my precious, Godly, beloved dad went to be with the Lord. How could it have been that long?! And before that anniversary comes will come the birth of my first grandchild, his first great-grandchild, whose middle name will be his name. What an impact he had and continues to have.
I cannot wait to receive my pre-ordered copy of your book, even though I know it is going to rip my heart plum’ out.
Wishing you peace today…
We lived near Knoxville for a short time and I never had the pleasure of meeting you. I only wish I had the chance to give you a big hug. Your blog has always provided such beauty, kindness, love, inspiration, and laughter to me. Your candid post today brought many tears to my eyes. I have not read your book yet, but I want to congratulate you on pouring your lovely heart into something that will certainly touch many lives.
Jeanine Meers says
Thank you for being honest and real. We all need that. I enjoyed your book very much, and I pray that you and your family will be completely healed. I repeat that we all need that.
Southern Gal says
Although I don’t know you in person, you are one of the most courageous, honest women I know. Keep going what you’re doing and when you feel overwhelmed, know you are not alone.
I am feeling a big round of tears for you and your Dad. Sad to say my Dad was not avail be emotionally to our family. Only God can help us to accept what happened to all of our family.
Tears here as my daddy passed a year ago this past March. I had just left the hospital and my daughter was with him. We had just gotten in the door and turned around to say good bye even though he was allready gone. I find I miss my mum so much, and dad too but this has hit home and made me realize that yes I do miss my daddy as much. I just think of “women things” to tell mum, about sewing, crafts, the grandkids and yes my grandson has dads middle name as does my son.
HUGS and glad you were there when your daddy passed.
Shawna Lizama Ford says
My dad just passed away on Father’s Day this year… this excerpt touched me in many ways. I’ve just ordered your book. Thank you for being brace enough to pen the words that so many of us mourners need to read, so that we know we aren’t alone. Your words are a gift and this blog has been such a treasure to read.
Tracey B says
It’s after 2am here and I just finished reading All The Pretty Things. Many moments in your book resonated with me even though my upbringing was on the other side of the world and fractured in different ways. One chapter and specific moment though, caught me off guard and had me shaking with silent sobbing as my partner slept soundly beside me. My dear dad passed away 4 years ago next week and I was with him during his last hours and as he took his final breath. The description of your daddy’s passing brought the memories and emotions of losing my dad flooding to the surface.
My dad was my rock and I miss him every day, but the pain has eased now, only popping up to surprise me unawares every now and then.
I have not been a follower of your blog (until today) and bought your book after it was recommended by another blogger (KA Wood). Thank you Edie for sharing your story, your hurts and painful memories, your joys and successes.
PS my mum was named Edith Ann by her mother in her father’s absence, but he disliked the name Edith – so she grew up known as Annie (it gave me a little chuckle when you were dubbed Edie but NOT Edith!) My mum was taken from us at 38 by cancer, you are so blessed to have had your mama and sister by your side.